Isotta72 Fan Fiction Gallery
Messages : 31
Date d'inscription : 19/09/2010
Age : 22
Localisation : le Ranch du Boulot Blanc
|Sujet: Re: Isotta72 Fan Fiction Gallery Lun 4 Oct 2010 - 13:02|| |
Wonderful fics of Isotta72.
Très belle fic Isotta72.
Messages : 1827
Date d'inscription : 25/05/2010
Age : 58
Localisation : au ranch des sapins noirs
|Sujet: Re: Isotta72 Fan Fiction Gallery Mer 6 Oct 2010 - 22:49|| |
Intense ! Oui, tous tes écrits me remuent énormément et font réfléchir.
Intense ! Yes, your writings move me enormously and make me ponder.
Pour moi, Dieu existe. Il nous aime mais nous laisse libre de choisir la direction de notre vie.
Malheureusement, l’HOMME peut être mauvais : il est jaloux des autres, il aime la richesse, il recherche le pouvoir. C’est pourquoi il provoque la guerre, la destruction ou la mort. Dieu ne cautionne pas ces actes mais ne les empêchera pas. En effet, l’homme ne lui pardonnerait pas non plus son ingérence dans sa vie.
For me, God exists. He loves us but let us free to choose the direction of our own life. Unfortunately, Human beings can be evil: they are jealous of the others, they like money, they look for power. It’s why they provoke wars, destruction or blood. God does not support those acts but will not stop them. Indeed, human beings would not forgive him for his interference in their life.
Enfin, Actarus peut compter sur la présence aimante d’un membre de sa famille, sa sœur. Elle aussi a connu le désastre même si elle ne s’en souvient pas trop. Grâce à cet amour fraternel, il pourra commencer à chasser ses démons qui le hantent.
At last, Duke can rely on his sister’s lovely presence. His family’s member has also known the same disaster even she does not remember too many. According to this brotherly love, he will be able to begin to fight his devils that haunt him.
On se croirait dans les bras d’Actarus tellement la description est réaliste. Mais cet écrit m’est douloureux. Pourquoi ?
Actarus a le droit d’aimer Aphélie. Son premier amour. Mais il n’a pas hésité à la remplacer dans son cœur par Végalia. C’est sur, pour raison d’état au départ. Mais, n’oublions pas qu’il en ait tombé aussi amoureux. Là, il est sur Terre : je suis persuadée qu’il connaît les sentiments de Vénusia à son égard. Elle ne lui cache pas. Et pourtant, il ne l’a jamais découragée. Les hommes ne sont pas tendres avec les femmes qu’ils n’aiment pas. Preuve qu’elle ne lui est pas indifférente.
Dans ‘bonne nuit’, pour moi, il trompe Vénusia. Ses désirs d’homme passent avant tout. Il a souffert, je le conçois. Mais n’est-il pas aussi un monstre vis-à-vis d’elle ? Il la fait souffrir. Et pourtant elle s’efface pour Aphélie. Ce n’est que mon avis évidemment.
I can see me in Duke’s arms because your description is so realist. But, this writing is painful for me. Why?
Duke is entitled to love Naïda. She was his first love. But he did not hesitate to substitute her in his heart by Rubina. Of course, he did it by a state raison first. But, do not let us forget, he felt in love with her, too. Here, he lives on the Earth: I am convinced that he knows Hikaru’s feelings towards him. She does not hide them to him. However, he has never discouraged her. Men are not soft with women they don’t love. It’s obvious that she is not indifferent to him.
In ‘good night’, for me, he cheats on Hikaru. His men’ desires pass above all. He has suffered, I understand this. But isn’t he also a monster facing her? He makes her suffer. However, she keeps in the background for Naïda. It is only my opinion of course.
Messages : 197
Date d'inscription : 29/07/2010
Localisation : italie
|Sujet: Re: Isotta72 Fan Fiction Gallery Jeu 7 Oct 2010 - 8:45|| |
HI Sweetcandy.. thanks a lot for your comment.. I'm the one who is moved, because good comments, in the sense of deep comments, are always welcome!
About God: yes, I think as you do that God exists, but I also can understand that a man can have doubts, or feel regret against him, even can stop loving him toward events like massacres and total violence. Duke is deeply wounded, and he's tring to rebuild himself, and the capacity to feel love again, for everything, included God, is on the way.
About Maria: I always thought that Maria is the best "therapy" for him..he loves the Earth, but always seem to be stuck in the middle.. between his new life and world, his new mission, and memories.. Maria has a double effect for him: he makes peace with his memories, and understand can love the Earth, keeping his fleedian identity.
About Good night: Duke had a social role on Fleed, and he was a boy: the pressure made from family and political events have influenced heavily his behavior.. and I'm not so sure he felt in love with Rubina..I think he simply made what somebody esle decided for him..
I have written a story with another boy, Amon 114, about what happened on Fleed before its destruction.. I'm sorry, it's just in italian, but I'd like to translate it in english.. it's called VEGATRON:
and about his behavior with Venusia: he's twenty years old, wounded deeply in his souls, he thinks he's the only survivor of an entire planet.. all at once he meets Naida.. she is'nt only one of the fleedians.. she is the one he loved.. I can understand that Venusia disappears from his eyes, he's a human being, and so young, above all.. in the episode 25 he seems to be completely kidnapped from Naida.. so kidnapped that he ca'nt see or understand nothing, not only Venusia, but even Naida's sufferences... he sleeps.. exactly as during the night I described..
I like to see Duke more " human" , he makes mistakes, he has his weaknesses, and this makes me love him even more..
Sorry for my english... I hope you can understand what I wanted to mean...
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